This essay demonstrates a developing maturity in your written expression and a sophisticated understanding of the wider mechanisms of spoken and text-message communication. It develops a range of interesting points, and demonstrates a high level of personal engagement with the thinking behind the analysis of language.

The main advice to ensure your (significant) improvement in future essays that contain language analysis is to provide a specific example to match every point you make. You also should then explore the language features contained within each of the examples that you choose.

Try adjusting the viewpoint of your essays – you can remove the use of the personal pronoun “I”. This leads to a more confident and authoritative tone to your writing.

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